Hey guys- I don't normally use this website, but I took some time to read your reviews and a lot of them are written how Mule used to post. Remember that overly long and stupidly complex sentence structure he would use? I'm seeing that way too much, and your reviews tend to be a real pain to read.

I'm not saying you have to publish sarcastic shitpost reviews. If you're writing an in-depth review of the game, that's great. But the reviews can be better.

Reread your reviews before posting them and think to yourself: can I get to the point more concisely? Ultimately your goal should be to make your sentences less wordy. Try practicing by typing a section of your review in Twitter and see if you can make it fit the character limit.

Doing all this will make your points pop and your arguments easier to follow. It will greatly improve your reviews, and your perspective/voice will become stronger.