this game is deadass just ass lmao but theres something about playing what feels like someones first writing attempt that made me enjoy through it. biggest strength is without a doubt the art despite that, but the gameplay is evaporated water tier.

the writing is full of wasted motion and the script just constantly drags its feet in some kind of way, like having characters speak when they don't need to, filling constant textboxes with ellipses or just having some awkwardly worded stuff.

the actual content isnt substantial at all until about halfway through it too, which while i still think has all of the line level flaws, plays to its strengths much better.

samekichi and wadanohara carry this shit SO hard, theres a couple of funny moments involving the other chars here and there, but theyre the only ones i really cared about by the end.

the optimal revision would honestly just be having the whole game be focused entirely on them interacting throughout the circumstances, rather than him kinda just popping up to say the exact same thing over and over again.

has SOUL tho, i wanna see this writer do something else with more experience.