Conservative poetry, some nicely rendered art buried between some really ugly MS Paint jobs, a choice system that's black and white even though the story bangs on about how the world isn't just black and white, misspellings all over the place...

I don't know. I liked some ideas, but I think overall the execution just wasn't there. I wanted to like this, too. But I felt like it was getting excessively preachy about halfway into the narrative.