For as much as the material around the game flaunts its aesthetic, it's barely present in the product, and what is there can't make a frankly boring story more engaging. In some scenes, it does the opposite.
Dear visual novel writers: Hire an editor. You have to. If you don't think you have to, you especially have to. DM me, I'll do it for next to nothing.
Dear visual novel writers: Hire an editor. You have to. If you don't think you have to, you especially have to. DM me, I'll do it for next to nothing.